I know I've said this before: Patricia MacLachlan is one of my favourite authors. You may be familiar with her book Sarah, Plain and Tall, for which she won the Newbery Medal. It was produced as a Hallmark Hall of Fame movie in 1991, starring Glenn Close and Christopher Walken.
The movie is wonderful. The book is brilliant.
In an interview, MacLachlan once said that she wanted to create an intense emotional experience for the reader using very few words. It's because she's a genius at saying so much with so little that I love her work.
All the Places to Love (above) is the most beautiful children's book I've come across. Her words are spare, but enough to settle into your heart.
When I was older, Papa and I plowed the fields.
Where else is soil so sweet? he said.
Once Papa and I lay down in the field, holding hands,
And the birds surrounded us:
Raucous black grackles, redwings,
Crows in the dirt that swaggered like pirates.
When we left, Papa put a handful of dirt in his pocket.
I did too.
It reads like poetry. And I think that's why, years ago, I decided to take poetry classes. I wanted to learn to be less wordy, to write tight, to make words sizzle. With poetry, every word speaks. And isn't that what makes poetry profound?
Please allow me to share some snippets from poems I've recently savoured. I dare you not to be affected or astounded by at least one phrase.
No, no, there is no going back
Less and less you are
that possibility you were.
More and more you have become
those lives and deaths
that have belonged to you.
...
Every day you have less reason
not to give yourself away.
- Wendell Berry [1993-I]
*****
The work of the world is common as mud.
Botched, it smears the hands, crumbles to dust.
But the thing worth doing well done
has shape that satisfies, clean and evident.
- Marge Piercy [To be of use]
*****
This day is all that is
good and fair.
It is too dear
with its hopes and invitations,
to waste a moment on yesterdays.
- Ralph Waldo Emerson [From a Letter to His Daughter]
*****
Was it for this I uttered prayers,
And sobbed and cursed and kicked the stairs,
That now, domestic as a plate,
I should retire at half-past eight?
- Edna St. Vincent Millay [Grown Up]
*****
The birds have vanished down the sky
Now the last cloud drains away.
We sit together, the mountain and me,
until only the mountain remains.
- Li Po [Zazen on Ching-t'ing Mountain]
*****
I'm so thankful for authors and poets who worked hard on their craft, with purpose and dedication, so that someday this reader would be touched and inspired by their words. I can only hope to do the same.
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Feature photo by Joy Bailey
Thank you for sharing Patricia's focus on writing to "create an intense emotional experience for the reader using very few words". It truly is something to aspire towards. I have been learning over the years that 'less is more' when it comes to writing. The impact can be so powerful. You, Joy, have been an influencer in that area of my life. Thank you! And thanks for this wonderful post and those great lines of poetry you shared today. Today I'm drawn to the Ralph Waldo Emerson lines.
ReplyDeleteBrenda, thank you for your very kind words. Yes, I think less is definitely more.
DeleteThank you, dear Joy, for blessing us with these wonderful poetry samples.
ReplyDeleteRalph Waldo Emerson's words inspired me most today.
Wendy, I wonder if every letter from Emerson to his daughter was so beautiful. :)
DeleteHow inspiring...
ReplyDeleteThanks, Tracy. ;)
DeleteOh my word, Joy, I think we are kindred spirits! This post is also wonderful and brilliant. I love your quote from Wendell Berry, "Every day you have less reason
ReplyDeletenot to give yourself away." Perhaps as a poet you agree, our words are indeed to be given away. We nurture them enough until they are ready to fly and bless the world. Thank you for every word of this post, Joy.
Alan, your comments are always so encouraging! Thank you. And that quote by Wendell Berry sinks deep into my soul every time I read it. Yes, I think we must be kindred spirits. :)
DeleteBeautiful! I too love how poetry says so much with so few words! It plumbs the depths of the heart! 💞
ReplyDelete"It plumbs the depths of the heart." That's it right there! Thank you, Mary.
DeleteWonderful post, Joy! Love your phrase ‘to make words sizzle.’ Fabulous! Thanks for sharing some of your favourite verses with us. Such terrific works. Blessings on your day. I know you have blessed mine.
ReplyDeleteSharon, thanks so much for your encouragement. :)
DeleteThank you for a sweet moment savouring such wonderful words.
ReplyDeleteThank you for exposing us to new and different authors and thank you for their words that will linger in our hearts forever Brenda Wood
ReplyDeleteThank you for these gems. Your post and the nuggets you've included inspire me to be less wordy and to choose words that sizzle.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful post. I am learning to choose the right word so that I don't have to use too many of them. Your poetry selections are profound. I especially like the Wendell Berry lines. Edna St. Vincent Millay's conclusion had me nodding, too.
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