I love Christmas carols. I love how, for
about 6 weeks of the year, believers and non-believers alike are singing
praises and glo-o-o-o-o-oooo-o-o-o-o-oooo-o-o-o-o-ooorias.
Secular radio stations are dashing through
the snow to deck the halls, asking Santa Baby for yachts and diamond rings, and
wondering how on earth Grandma could get run over by a reindeer.
But they are
also proclaiming Therefore, Christian
men, be sure, wealth or rank possessing, ye who now will bless the poor, shall
yourselves find blessing.
O
morning stars, together proclaim the holy birth! And praises sing to God the
King, and peace to men on earth.
And
O
come let us adore Him, Christ the Lord.
Even Charlie Brown sings “Glory to the newborn King”!
It makes me wonder as I wander, and giggle
like a babe in Toyland.
Yet some could say that it isn’t the most
wonderful time of the year, 2015. It’s not a yum-yummy world made for
sweethearts. They would agree with Henry Wadsworth Longfellow’s words, “There is no peace on earth, I said”.
In 1863 he learned that his oldest son,
Charles, had been severely wounded in battle.
So in 1864, Longfellow’s world was not at
peace either, and hadn’t been for years. What’s more, he had been personally
affected by the war.
He wrote seven stanzas to his poem that
Christmas Day in 1864. Two of them are never sung in our version of “I Heard
the Bells on Christmas Day” but I think they are important to include because
they give us a good idea of Longfellow’s world, which strikingly parallels our
own. They help us to understand why he said, “there is no peace on earth”, and to remind us that “God is not dead, nor doth He sleep”.
In our writers group this month we were
challenged to write a new verse to a favourite Christmas carol.
(I encourage my
fellow Inscribers to try this fun exercise.)
The words “there is no peace on earth, I said” resonated so much with me that
I did some research on the song and then added my own verse at the end – my
proclamation in response to the stanzas before it.
Christmas
Bells
(Longfellow’s
original poem, complete with all seven stanzas, and an extra one added at the
end by Joylene M. Bailey)
I heard the bells on Christmas Day
Their old familiar carols play,
And wild and sweet
The words repeat
Of peace on earth, good-will to men!
And thought how, as the day had come,
The belfries of all Christendom
Had rolled along
The unbroken song
Of peace on earth, good-will to men!
Till, ringing, singing on its way,
The world revolved from night to day,
A voice, a chime
A chant sublime
Of peace on earth, good-will to men!
Then from each black accursed mouth
The cannon thundered in the South,
And with the sound
The carols drowned
Of peace on earth, good-will to men!
It was as if an earthquake rent
The hearth-stones of a continent,
And made forlorn
The households born
Of peace on earth, good-will to men!
And in despair I bowed my head;
"There is no peace on earth," I said;
"For hate is strong,
And mocks the song
Of peace on earth, good-will to men!"
Then pealed the bells more loud and deep:
"God is not dead; nor doth he sleep!
The Wrong shall fail,
The Right prevail,
With peace on earth, good-will to men!"
Now let me gather up my faith.
My God’s at work; His love is great.
Loud let bells ring,
And I will sing,
Of Peace on earth, good-will to men!
God is not dead, nor doth He sleep. He’s
still at work. He’s still Love. He’s still in charge.
So rest ye merry, Inscribers, let nothing
you dismay. Remember, Christ, our Saviour, was born upon this day: to save us
all from Satan’s power when we were gone astray.
O tidings of comfort and joy, comfort and
joy.
O tidings of comfort and joy.
Victorian Carolers
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Carolers
Joy, your use of phrases from familiar carols to draw the reader along is a brilliant literary tool. It made me, as a reader, feel on par with you, the writer, and pulled me along to discover your message. Very well crafted. As for the content, I was close to tears by the time you got to 'So rest ye, merry Inscribers!' This was a very special post. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your encouragement, Bobbi.
Delete'I Heard the Bells' is one of my favourite carols, perhaps because I am a Longfellow fan in general. Last night at our music practice, (I lead worship at our church) we were singing this song and two of the singers said they had never heard this song before! I was amazed. Anyway, I LOVE the line "God is not dead nor does he sleep". I, too, am thankful that this time of year people are receptive to the gospel and without n=knowing it they are proclaiming the good news about jesus.
ReplyDeleteYes, that line is so very powerful. There is something so reassuring in knowing that God does not sleep and is always aware even when I am unaware. :)
DeleteI have always enjoyed this song but I have never heard all of the stanza's as you said. I love how he is so real about the times he lives in yet in the end proclaims that God is not dead and right will prevail. You are right that it is a fitting time for now. And I agree with Bobbi that you put it together magically. I loved it. It's funny to me that you started out with the song Angels We Have Heard on High (my least favorite) as every year as a child I absolutely cringed when it was sung...especially at school!! As an adult I have gotten more used to it...but still..I cringe if it is sung out of tune. I do love all other Christmas Carols though...especially Joy To The World ;)
ReplyDeleteIt's funny that your least favourite is Angels We Have Heard on High. That one has always been my favourite! Especially the glooooorias. I think it was the way you could harmonize to it. Good thing there are enough Christmas Carols around that everyone can have a different favourite.
DeleteLongfellow doesn't mince words, does he? But I must say, Joy, that your stanza brings tears to my eyes...it did when we sang it at Writer's Cafe and it did again today--so much power, so much hope, in the proclamation of God's message of love and peace. Thanks for sharing this.
ReplyDeleteThank you Connie.
DeleteThank you for this researched and added to post on the carols. This song has long struck a chord with me as well … the victory over despair, even while peace is hard to find. The inner peace is what we long for. Thank you for musically putting together many lovely thoughts. (I had to sing the lines as I read them.)
ReplyDeleteMerry, merry, merry, merry, Christmas………
And Merry Christmas to you too Jocelyn.
DeleteI am not going to be too popular here, but I have an aversion to Christmas Carols as they seem to be played way too much on radio stations. Yet, I do love Longfellow's words here, and your stanza at the end fits so well. Thank you for letting us in to Longfellow's life making the song so much richer through understanding.
ReplyDeleteWhat?? Not like Christmas Carols?? haha I agree they seem to be played over and over and over. But I do love that the gospel is being shared to those who are unaware that it is being shared. :)
DeleteThanks for your post, Joy
ReplyDeleteI love Christmas carols and am "guilty" of playing them at other times of the year than Christmas :) I love the idea of writing an additional stanza to a Christmas carol. Thanks for the inspiration and encouragement.
My family used to roll their eyes when I started playing Christmas music in September! But now my grown daughters are doing the same thing ... haha. Yes, I think they are good any time of the year.
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your post this morning. I read it to my hubby. We both didn't know about the history of Christmas Bells. You did a splendid job of adding the final verse. I am with you. I love hearing the Christmas music - at the airport! in the courtyard of our place here in Mesa, AZ. In the stores. I sing along and find it soothing in the bustle of life.
Blessings and Merry Christmas,
Janis
Oh, Joylene, what a gift you have given us in these sweet songs and images. I'm so glad you focused on Longfellow's song. Our pastor used it in his message and it is one of my favorite verses, going from despair to hope. Your additional verse is beautiful!
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