April 09, 2024

Patricia MacLachlan and Poetry by Joylene M Bailey

 


I know I've said this before: Patricia MacLachlan is one of my favourite authors. You may be familiar with her book Sarah, Plain and Tall, for which she won the Newbery Medal. It was produced as a Hallmark Hall of Fame movie in 1991, starring Glenn Close and Christopher Walken. 

The movie is wonderful. The book is brilliant.

In an interview, MacLachlan once said that she wanted to create an intense emotional experience for the reader using very few words. It's because she's a genius at saying so much with so little that I love her work.

All the Places to Love (above) is the most beautiful children's book I've come across. Her words are spare, but enough to settle into your heart.


When I was older, Papa and I plowed the fields.

Where else is soil so sweet? he said.

Once Papa and I lay down in the field, holding hands,

And the birds surrounded us:

Raucous black grackles, redwings,

Crows in the dirt that swaggered like pirates.

When we left, Papa put a handful of dirt in his pocket.

I did too.


It reads like poetry. And I think that's why, years ago, I decided to take poetry classes. I wanted to learn to be less wordy, to write tight, to make words sizzle. With poetry, every word speaks. And isn't that what makes poetry profound?

Please allow me to share some snippets from poems I've recently savoured. I dare you not to be affected or astounded by at least one phrase. 


No, no, there is no going back

Less and less you are 

that possibility you were.

More and more you have become 

those lives and deaths

that have belonged to you.

...

Every day you have less reason

not to give yourself away.

- Wendell Berry [1993-I]


*****


The work of the world is common as mud.

Botched, it smears the hands, crumbles to dust.

But the thing worth doing well done

has shape that satisfies, clean and evident.

- Marge Piercy [To be of use]


*****


This day is all that is

good and fair.

It is too dear

with its hopes and invitations, 

to waste a moment on yesterdays.

- Ralph Waldo Emerson [From a Letter to His Daughter]


*****


Was it for this I uttered prayers,

And sobbed and cursed and kicked the stairs,

That now, domestic as a plate,

I should retire at half-past eight?

- Edna St. Vincent Millay [Grown Up]


*****


The birds have vanished down the sky

Now the last cloud drains away.


We sit together, the mountain and me,

until only the mountain remains.

- Li Po [Zazen on Ching-t'ing Mountain]


*****


I'm so thankful for authors and poets who worked hard on their craft, with purpose and dedication, so that someday this reader would be touched and inspired by their words. I can only hope to do the same.


~~~~~

Feature photo by Joy Bailey


Joy lives and writes in lake country, Alberta, where she resides on three pretty little acres with The Cowboy, a couple of seniors, and a couple of pets. Her latest story was a bedtime one for the grands, about a purple horse named Secret, and her turtle friend, Lightning Bolt. Find more of her joy-infused writing at her blog, Scraps of Joy.

April 03, 2024

Praying for Our Readers by Sandi Somers

 



I wish that I had told my writing students to give some thought to what they wanted their books to make happen inside the people who read them.

Frederick Buechner

 Ten years ago in my first months writing for our blog, I wrote a post based on John Bunyan’s conversation with his book. I repeat it here with some adaptations.

John Bunyan’s Conversation with His Book

One author who articulated what he wanted to happen inside his readers was John Bunyan, who wrote The Pilgrim's Progress, one of the best-known allegories in Christian literature.

In the sequel, the journey of Pilgrim’s wife and children, Bunyan instructed the book to bravely go out into the world and tell people how much God loves them.

The book raised objections (and I’m paraphrasing some here): “What if they don’t believe me? What if people get angry? What if they criticize you, the author? What if they don’t like the way you wrote?”

Bunyan answered, “Don’t be afraid, Book, as you are a friend and are sent to friends, not enemies. If anyone objects to your authenticity, come back to me, and I will confirm that you are mine. Turn away from people who criticize you. Seek instead those who will rejoice when they read you.”

Prayers for Our Readers 

Pilgrim’s Progress, written over three hundred years ago, has challenged me again to be more specific as I pray for my readers. I’m still learning that praying our words into our readers’ lives can have a great impact. Here are points you may find helpful: 

·       Before praying for your readers, ask God for a listening attitude for His inspiration, His message and His guidance for the particular writing of the day.

·       Clarify your overall goal for the readers of each particular w-i-p.

·       Ask God to take your writing to those who need to hear from God.

·       Pray that each article will be a work of art to challenge your readers’ intellects as well as their spirits.

·       Ask the living Lord to step out of the sentences, paragraphs and ideas to leave His gentle touch on their lives.

·       Know how your prayers have great power. “The earnest prayer of a righteous person has great power and produces wonderful results” (James 5:16 NLT).

·       Our church’s mission is for each person to know Jesus personally and become His devoted follower. Join Bunyan’s prayer:

 And may (your words) persuade some that go astray,

To turn their Foot and Heart to the right Way.[1]

And you? What do you want your writing to make happen inside your readers? As you explore this question, what are you discovering about how you can pray for yourself, your message, and your readers? What is God prompting you to do?

Image by Our Daily Bread


[1]Adapted from John Bunyan, Revised and Updated by L. Edward Hazelbaker, The Pilgrims Progress in Modern English, (North Brunswick, NJ colon Bridge -Logos Publishers. 1998) 215 to 221.

 

April 02, 2024

Past Experiences ~ by Brenda J. Wood

The nosiest neighbour ever, lived across the way from me. He trained his binoculars on our kitchen window and then gossiped everything possible with the neighbours.

He made the mistake of telling me what he was up to and I immediately put up a blind. I never opened it. Ever. 

This week I noticed how dark the kitchen was. I thought about that blind. Surely, I could open it now. After all, that neighbour died fifteen years ago! Light poured in. 

Let’s shed a little light on our past, folks. Let’s lift our blinds on what used to be, because used to be is experience captured. We are stronger than we think. Gumption comes with maturity (otherwise called old!)

Read and circle everything that you came through. Total them up:

bad childhood    broken engagement    war    afraid    lonely     grief    financial difficulty  difficult parents    orphan    widow(er)    separation     divorce    childhood diseases

long work hours    unemployed      surgeries     cancer     homeless    government stuff spending too much    saved too much    missed a holiday    seniors home   poor choices    faith   no faith     thoughtless children     old    young    pain     lost career    retired   

Impressive, isn’t it. What words did I miss? Add them. Take stock of where you came from and make a firm decision to move forward, experience in hand, because we are now experts in living!

History says we are survivors! This season of our lives is nothing but more of the same, only longer. Just because things aren’t going the way we want, that doesn’t mean they aren’t going the way they should.

As an expert, we have certain responsibilities. A true expert shares what they know. They are humble in attitude and behavior. They show respect to others. They do not place themselves at the head of the table and rule the rest of us with their secrets.  (Luke 14:10)

Over time we learn not to trust those ‘experts’ who have lots of knowledge but no life experience.  

We keep not silent. It is not our way. So today I ask you where you are an expert. Should you be writing about your expertise about child care, filling empty hours or even basic home cooking?

Should you tell your neighbour how to get rid of that center seam in her quilt? Where to buy the best bologna? How to stay alive and even thrive in a pandemic?

Tell folks in every way possible. Write it. Talk it. Whisper it. Your expertise must be passed on; otherwise, you are no expert. You are a dog in the manger hoarding your little bits so that others must revere you and beg for your truths. 

That is why we write. We share all we’ve learned for the better good. Let your words speak boldly into other people’s futures

See you next time, fellow experts!


Brenda J. Wood has authored more than fifty books. She is a seasoned motivational speaker, who declares the Word of God with wisdom, humour, and common sense.



April 01, 2024

P is for Praying Writers ~ by Wendy L. Macdonald


 

 

By day the LORD directs his love,

at night his song is with me—

a prayer to the God of my life.

Psalm 42:8 NIV


For years I’ve prayed for God’s will to be done in my writing. Often, I learn His will the long way. (Saying the hard way doesn’t work for me because God can use all things for good.)

Recently I shared with someone that my mental health suffers when I spend much time on social media. I also said I was tempted to give up pursuing getting traditionally published. My honesty was appreciated and my contract with that person was terminated. 

A mix of grief and relief overwhelmed my thoughts for a few days. Eventually, relief took full reign. 

My goal of getting traditionally published was obviously not God’s goal for the moment. But He knew I needed to learn the long way. Being a highly sensitive person and pursuing a book contract don’t go well together for me. Now I know. 

My writing isn’t terrible, but I’m terrible at being fully engaged with social media. I love a quiet and creative life. And even though I love my Facebook page community, I needed to cut back there too so that joy was still present.

Self-publishing (or a small traditional publishing contract) may be in my future. I’m praying about that now. In the meantime, I’m making room for my sensitive side to flourish. One step I’ve taken is to give my notice of no longer administrating this blog. I’ll stay until the end of November at the latest. (Please join me in praying for someone suitable to step up to this wonderful opportunity to draw closer to fellow InScribers. You all are awesome writers, and I’ve learned so much from you.)

A praying writer trusts that God knows best. His ways are best. And even if we must wander in the wilderness for awhile, we don’t wander alone. He is present. He is training us. He is good no matter how long the journey is. 

Prayerful blessings.

Wendy L. Macdonald is an inspirational blogger and YouTuber who loves to photograph nature on Vancouver Island. Her happy place is making junk journals to sell in her Etsy shop. Her byline is: “My faith is not shallow because I’ve been rescued from the deep.”