Showing posts with label revising. Show all posts
Showing posts with label revising. Show all posts

May 26, 2025

Editing??? Not Me, Not Now!! by Brenda J Wood




Editing? The farthest thing from my mind. I never edit ever. While I am writing, I write. I scribble the words. I flurry them onto computer paper. I sense the urgency of my message. Editing??? Editing destroys my thinking. Editing destroys the flow of my words. Editing too soon disrupts the energy of the thought. 

There is no room for correction in the middle of a task.

Suppose while a child put the dishes away, you holler at them for putting the plate on top of a saucer or a cup where the tea set belongs? That sounds foolish, doesn’t it? No child would do that and you would disrupt their thought and then they’d be stirring things and putting things and correcting things. Instead of actually getting the dishes out of the dishwasher.

That’s what happens when you edit too soon. Your perfection life takes over the higgledy-piggledy thoughts from your grammar teacher and intercepts your brilliant thesis. You stop and dot the i's and eliminate spelling mistakes or get distracted by the dictionary. Or Siri is trying to tell you how to correct the spelling mistake, and the thought you had about that peculiar little child sitting in sand by the side of the road; the story you were telling; the life you were living inside your head is gone.

This is why I never ever edit while I write. Editing is for later when all of the heat of the word is on the page; then and then only do you go back and edit. And just so you know, once you start to edit there is no end because we are picky beyond picky and most readers won’t even notice.

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Brenda J Wood has authored more than fifty books. She is a seasoned motivational speaker, who declares the Word of God with wisdom, humour, and common sense.


May 07, 2025

Tighty-Writey by Susan Barclay

 

 

One of my goals for 2025 is to work on rewrites or revisions of past work, and I’ve been doing that for the last few months. Rewriting is an important part of the submission process. You want your work to be the best that it can be before sending it into the hands of editors, agents, publishers, readers—in short, decision-makers. With the amount of competition in traditional publishing, nothing less than superlative will do, and even then there’s no certainty of acceptance. Writers have always needed a thick skin and that is even more true today, apart from self-publication.

Personally, I enjoy the process of revision. There is something about viewing your story with fresh eyes that allows you to see where a plot line may have gone sideways, a character needs greater development, description is wanting, or there are typographical or grammatical errors. While revision doesn’t always make a piece better, in my experience it usually does. The writing gets tighter with fewer extraneous sections or words.

How many drafts I write or how long it takes me depends on the needs of the piece and my ability to accurately assess those needs. I might pass a story or article through my writers’ group or a writing friend for extra feedback. I might let it steep a while and let my thoughts about it percolate (apologies for the mixed metaphor!). I might set it aside for a while and work on something else before coming back to it again. At a certain point, though, I let it go and send it off. That usually happens when I’m well-satisfied that there is nothing or little more I can do to improve it.

When the revisions are complete and I’ve submitted my work with a little prayer, I breathe a sigh of happiness and move on to something old or something new. I don’t worry while I wait; I trust the process and I trust God to know what is best for both my writing and me.

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c. Susan Barclay, 2025. For more about Susan and her writing, please visit www.susan-barclay.blogspot.com

 

October 11, 2024

Variety is the Spice of (the Writing) Life by Steph Beth Nickel

 



I am eclectically interested and eclectically involved. This variety adds spice to my life . . . and to my writing. I have plans to write several things: picture books, YA spec fiction, devotionals, memoir, and more.

Although some writers are focused primarily on one genre, variety adds spice to their life as well.

How?

There is so much more to writing than putting pen to paper or fingers to keyboard.

For example . . .

Researching
The word "research" may bring to mind hours of Googling, seeking the information we want to include in our writing, and that may very well be part of your writing process. However, if we keep our eyes and ears open to the inspiration that is all around us every day, that can be considered research as well. From snippets of conversation to a building or ruins that spark our imagination to the beauty of a sunset . . . So much of our day-to-day life can find its way into our writing.

Outlining
We all outline to differing degrees, but creating a plan (whether extremely detailed or bare bones) for our blog post or full-length manuscript is part of the writing process. 

Writing
And now we get to what the majority of writers likely enjoys most, what we want to get back to when we're doing something else, actually getting words on the page.

Revising
We rarely share the first draft of our writing with anyone. In fact we may revise, revise, and revise again before allowing anyone else to see our work. We are often told not to revise while we're still in the process of writing our first draft. However, depending on how we work best, we may want to tweak as we go. Each of us must discover the most effective way of getting our projects completed. But whether we revise as we go or complete the first draft without looking back, further revision will be needed. 

Seeking Input
Beta readers can do for us what we can't do for ourselves. We know what we mean by our words and can't tell how those words will come across to others without seeking their input. Tiffany Yates Martin states that editing our own writing is like performing brain surgery on oneself, and no one is going to attempt that, not even the world's most skilled brain surgeon. Finding those who will read our work and give us honest feedback is priceless. 

Revising Again
While we need not incorporate every suggestion our beta readers (and even our editors) suggest, if we hear the same thing from multiple sources, it bears considering. After we receive input, it's time for another round of revisions. (I, for one, wish I could write a brilliant first draft, hit Publish, and get onto the next project, but that's not how the Writing Recipe works.)

Hiring an Editor
If we plan to hire a developmental editor, obviously this step will be happen earlier in the process. However, now is the time to consider content and line editing, as well as proofreading. In fact, we may want to book with our editor as soon as we have a "completion" date in mind. Depending on how busy our editor is, we'll want to get on their schedule as soon as is realistic. (And, yes, even editors need to have their writing edited.)

Finding an Agent or Publisher
When we have a polished manuscript in hand (or the required portion of a manuscript), it's time to look for an agent or publisher if we're seeking to be traditionally published. We must be sure to carefully follow their guidelines. More people than ever are seeking to get a publishing deal, and we don't want to be disregarded immediately because of an avoidable mistake, such as addressing our inquiry to "Whom It May Concern."

Self-Publishing
If we intend to self-publish your work, there is a plethora of things to learn. One great resource for doing so is Orna Ross's book Creative Self-Publishing: ALLi’s Guide to Independent Publishing for Authors and Poets.

Marketing / Promotion
And whether we go the trad or indie route to publishing our work, much of the responsibility will fall squarely on our shoulders to market and promote our writing. 

The following three "spices" may not seem to apply to the writing life, but their benefits will affect every area of our lives . . . including our writing.

Eating Well
When we nourish our bodies with healthy food, there are many benefits, including the ability to think more clearly. 

Drinking Water
Many writers live on coffee. While I enjoy my lattes and cappuccinos, I know it's important to consume enough water during the day. (This is something I have to work on.)

Getting Exercise
I can almost hear the collective groan. The best way to stick with an exercise routine is to find something we enjoy. Walking. Hiking. Biking. Joining a recreational sports team. Getting (and using) a gym membership. One of the many benefits of getting regular exercise is that our subconscious continues to work on those writing "blocks" when we're focused on something else. Bonus!

Just as we prefer one spice over another, as writers, we prefer some of the above "spices" more than others. Still, the variety of responsibilities adds interest and dimension to our lives.