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For more about Susan Barclay and her writing, please visit www.susan-barclay.blogspot.com
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a coffeeshop
i wish
but the espresso machine
the buzz of conversation
the bell that sounds
every. single. time
the door opens
nope
not a coffeeshop
<sigh>
the park
i should be walking
i should be taking photos
i should have worn
bug spray
sunscreen
a hat
nope
not the park
<double sigh>
my desk
nonexistent
happens in the midst of renos
in its place
couch that needs replacing
multipurpose couch
reading nook
dining area
location for napping
for now
the couch is it
my makeshift writing spot
ideal
far from it
but workable
temporary
a spot
to be grateful for
but maybe
just maybe
i'll give the coffeeshop
or even the park
another try
how about you
Steph Beth Nickel is the former Editor of FellowScript and the current InScribe Contest Coordinator. Steph is an editor and author and plans to relocate to Saskatchewan from Ontario to be close to family in this year or next. (Headshot Photo Credit: Jaime Mellor Photography)
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REDUCTION
In this season of caregiving
I am being reduced
Cooked, simmered, evaporated
A concentrated version of myself
Who am I now?
I am daughter
I am mother
I am wife
Who am I?
What is this new flavour?
This new texture?
This new consistency?
I seek more of Him and less of me
Holy Spirit, come
I am jellied and trembling
When I am weak, I am strong
Give me this day love, joy, peace
Patience, kindness, goodness
Faithfulness, gentleness, self-control
Teach me Your ways
Make me lie down in green pastures
Lead me beside quiet waters
Restore my soul
Fill me with Your sacred rest
In this pressure cooker, sautéed
I become saltier for Christ
Taste and see that the Lord is good
His mercies are new every morning
This is my desire
To spend time in God’s stock pot
Take up less volume in the world
And enhance its flavour
Father, You are the Master Chef
The 3-star Michelin
Make of me what You will
I am Your creation
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c. Susan Barclay, 2025. For more about Susan and her writing, please visit www.susan-barclay.blogspot.com
I know I've said this before: Patricia MacLachlan is one of my favourite authors. You may be familiar with her book Sarah, Plain and Tall, for which she won the Newbery Medal. It was produced as a Hallmark Hall of Fame movie in 1991, starring Glenn Close and Christopher Walken.
The movie is wonderful. The book is brilliant.
In an interview, MacLachlan once said that she wanted to create an intense emotional experience for the reader using very few words. It's because she's a genius at saying so much with so little that I love her work.
All the Places to Love (above) is the most beautiful children's book I've come across. Her words are spare, but enough to settle into your heart.
When I was older, Papa and I plowed the fields.
Where else is soil so sweet? he said.
Once Papa and I lay down in the field, holding hands,
And the birds surrounded us:
Raucous black grackles, redwings,
Crows in the dirt that swaggered like pirates.
When we left, Papa put a handful of dirt in his pocket.
I did too.
It reads like poetry. And I think that's why, years ago, I decided to take poetry classes. I wanted to learn to be less wordy, to write tight, to make words sizzle. With poetry, every word speaks. And isn't that what makes poetry profound?
Please allow me to share some snippets from poems I've recently savoured. I dare you not to be affected or astounded by at least one phrase.
No, no, there is no going back
Less and less you are
that possibility you were.
More and more you have become
those lives and deaths
that have belonged to you.
...
Every day you have less reason
not to give yourself away.
- Wendell Berry [1993-I]
*****
The work of the world is common as mud.
Botched, it smears the hands, crumbles to dust.
But the thing worth doing well done
has shape that satisfies, clean and evident.
- Marge Piercy [To be of use]
*****
This day is all that is
good and fair.
It is too dear
with its hopes and invitations,
to waste a moment on yesterdays.
- Ralph Waldo Emerson [From a Letter to His Daughter]
*****
Was it for this I uttered prayers,
And sobbed and cursed and kicked the stairs,
That now, domestic as a plate,
I should retire at half-past eight?
- Edna St. Vincent Millay [Grown Up]
*****
The birds have vanished down the sky
Now the last cloud drains away.
We sit together, the mountain and me,
until only the mountain remains.
- Li Po [Zazen on Ching-t'ing Mountain]
*****
I'm so thankful for authors and poets who worked hard on their craft, with purpose and dedication, so that someday this reader would be touched and inspired by their words. I can only hope to do the same.
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Feature photo by Joy Bailey
I keep this poem in my writing files to remind me to look for the nuances, subtle shades and depths in the commonplace with potential to blossom into inspiration.
Valentine for Ernest Mann by Naomi Shihah Nye
You can’t order a poem like you order a taco.
Walk up to the counter, say, “I’ll take two”
And expect it to be handed back to you
on a shiny plate.
Still, I like your spirit.
Anyone who says, “Here’s my address,
write me a poem,” deserves something in reply.
So I’ll tell you a secret instead:
poems hide. In the bottoms of our shoes,
they are sleeping. They are the shadows
drifting across our ceilings the moment
before we wake up. What we have to do
is live in a way that lets us find them.
Once I knew a man who gave his wife
two skunks for a valentine.
He couldn’t understand why she was crying.
“I thought they had such beautiful eyes,”
And he was serious. He was a serious man
who lived in a serious way. Nothing was ugly
just because the world said so. He really
liked those skunks. So, he re-invented them
as valentines and they became beautiful.
At least, to him. And the poems that had been
hiding
in the eyes of skunks for centuries
crawled out and curled up at his feet.
Maybe if we re-invent whatever our lives give us
we find poems. Check your garage, the odd
sock
in your drawer, the person you almost like, but
not quite.
And let me know.
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I think this poem is telling us something we all know as writers. Our readers may think writing ideas come from the fascinating and adventurous lives of writers but few of us lead such lives. The truth is, we as writers have a certain way of looking at the world around and within us, seeing the extraordinary in the ordinary ˗˗ a story behind the mundane. As the poem says, what we have to do is live in a way that lets us find them. By looking for subtle nuances in small, everyday circumstances and scenarios we find ideas to fill volumes.
What this poem doesn’t tell us is that as writers who are Christians, we have a Divine Inspirer. God is the Master Creator. Everything in this vast universe came from His infinite mind and hand. Being made in His image, we have a small share in that creativity. We have unlimited resources for writing ideas everywhere we look, but how we look is inspired by our heavenly Father.
I will give you hidden treasures and wealth tucked away in secret places; I will reveal them to you. Then you will know that I am the Eternal, the God of Israel, who calls you by name. (Isa. 45:3 The Voice)
I have found that going to the Revealer, asking Him to make known what He would have me write, eventually results in what I call a shining moment ˗˗ that moment when I see something in a new way, when the seed of an idea blooms suddenly in my mind and I can’t wait to develop it in writing. He never fails me.
Writing is a shy craft. Ideas flit through our heads at the oddest moments, in the strangest places, waking us from a sound sleep in the middle of the night, requiring a notebook close by for us to capture random inspirations for possible writing projects. That surge of adrenaline when an idea hits is God speaking, telling us, “Here! I am revealing to you the wealth tucked away in secret places! Be aware of the nuances here, with subtle shades of meaning and depth. Write it down and use it well, My child.”
Keep looking for the poems hiding in the eyes of skunks, waiting to curl up at your feet.
Inspiration for this poem came from John Truby, who wrote The Anatomy of Genres.
Carry me off to worlds unknown, of
dragons and hobbits and fae,
To planets and worlds beyond our own;
oh, what a marvelous day!
Tell me the stories of worlds
began, where darkness and light compete,
Or stories of ranchers way out
west who never admit defeat.
Show me the heroes battling crime—detectives,
PIs, and more,
Let me see from the other side
what happens behind closed doors.
Make me laugh and make me gasp; I’m
on the edge of my chair,
I love to be breathless and laugh
out loud; a story can take me there.
They’re growing up and finding out
who they’re meant to be,
Now looking back at what has been,
of what they now can see.
What motivates and drives us on;
what makes the story shine?
No matter what genre, it’s all
about love, love of many kinds.
Stories may take us far away or
take us deep inside,
The best of them will help us grow
while on an incredible ride.
I wish I could, I know I won’t.
My pencil dull indeed.
My laptop slow and lingering,
Sadly not up to speed.
I want to write. I wish I would.
No paper in my file.
The kids are wild and yelling.
My hair needs a better style.
So book deal rests upon my heart.
I wish I could. I know its cost.
My fingers twitch. The book is gone.
World’s masterpiece is lost.
Brenda J. Wood has authored more than fifty books. She is a seasoned motivational speaker, who declares the Word of God with wisdom, humour, and common sense.
B is for Bible
Inspired Word
God-breathed
Teaching
Rebuking
Correcting
Training
Within its cover, stories
The difficult quest
Rebirth
Overcoming
Comedy
Tragedy
The voyage and return
Within its stories, conflict
Man versus man
Versus God
Versus nature
Man versus self
Versus technology
Versus fate
Within its pages, images
A kingly authority
A warrior
A lowly peasant
A thief
Fire, clouds, storms at sea
Bread, wine, fish
A crown, a cross
And silver coins
The Word is Truth
The Word’s the Way
The Word is Life
The Word is His Story
History
Written for you
And for me
Holy Spirit
Breathe on me
Words of life
Loving
Encouraging
Healing
Serving
Holy Father
As I read
Help me see
And understand
And model
Teach me to write
And reach
Soli Deo Gloria
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