tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37258556.post7027538500531768332..comments2024-03-28T15:50:17.214-07:00Comments on InScribe Writers Online: A PillarTracy Krausshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05066853243062725525noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37258556.post-49632364289366107242008-01-22T09:00:00.000-07:002008-01-22T09:00:00.000-07:00Great images! Thank you. It reminds me of some pil...Great images! Thank you. It reminds me of some pillars that I know.<BR/><BR/>Also thanks to Marcia for getting a schedule going so that we are posting more often. Some really good stuff here, and a pleasure to read.Elsie Montgomeryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13739927333538419518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37258556.post-13788504588339181802008-01-17T21:40:00.000-07:002008-01-17T21:40:00.000-07:00Gwen, what a great tribute to a wonderful man. (Ab...Gwen, what a great tribute to a wonderful man. (About shape, some tinkering with line lengths to bring it into a pillar shape would be a nice addition to the thought.)Violet N.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16586574800230604652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37258556.post-60130622369627297212008-01-16T13:02:00.000-07:002008-01-16T13:02:00.000-07:00Beautiful and powerful. I was also trying to see ...Beautiful and powerful. I was also trying to see if there was anything to the shape of the poem, other than fitting the rhythm of the words. I like the two lines, "A man of hope, upheld by faith." Also like the first verse - strong images there. :)<BR/><BR/>Pam - I think maybe it should be "I would like to have known your grandfather." Or your last suggestion above. (And I'm an editor!)Bonnie Way aka the Koala Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11601183003333359031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37258556.post-28265310848859952312008-01-16T12:34:00.000-07:002008-01-16T12:34:00.000-07:00I would have liked to know your Grandfather...does...I would have liked to know your Grandfather...doesn't sound right. I would have liked to known...That sounds better. But it still doesn't sound right. I would have liked to have known...(I'm a writer?)Anyways, Grandpa sounds like a good guy! <BR/>Pamfudge4everhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16295705620837466292noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37258556.post-87291807693089071592008-01-16T12:31:00.000-07:002008-01-16T12:31:00.000-07:00Hello, Your poem has an interesting shape. It ...Hello,<BR/> Your poem has an interesting shape. It reminds me of a tree and suggests to me that your Grandfather was a solid oak. <BR/> "Loved ones snapped like apples plucked from a tree" is my favourite line. It has a crisp sound. <BR/> I would have liked to know your Grandfather!<BR/>Pamfudge4everhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16295705620837466292noreply@blogger.com