tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37258556.post6496716185540515532..comments2024-03-18T12:26:08.623-07:00Comments on InScribe Writers Online: If only. . .Tracy Krausshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05066853243062725525noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37258556.post-87614712722767977972008-12-21T18:05:00.000-07:002008-12-21T18:05:00.000-07:00Well done LC. I was well taken in with the first c...Well done LC. I was well taken in with the first cold breeze and that key on the outside of the door.Violet N.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16586574800230604652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37258556.post-41930615334784166762008-12-21T12:43:00.000-07:002008-12-21T12:43:00.000-07:00Is this a book? It should be a book. I want to rea...Is this a book? It should be a book. I want to read more. Absolutely gripping and I love the shift in POV and settings. Very edge of the seat reading. Great. Good job Elsie.Glynishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15621548333351709607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37258556.post-51794695220821990872008-12-20T11:35:00.000-07:002008-12-20T11:35:00.000-07:00Had me on the edge of my seat! Slow down my racing...Had me on the edge of my seat! Slow down my racing heart.Lynda Schultzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18219094035739537261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37258556.post-3351689793228401232008-12-18T19:16:00.000-07:002008-12-18T19:16:00.000-07:00Wow, Elsie, I had to skip to the end to see if thi...Wow, Elsie, I had to skip to the end to see if this was safe to read on my way to sleep!<BR/><BR/>I like the way you introduce Sandra's dad through Mike's thoughts. And I like the ending.Joanna Malloryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09009706543743970845noreply@blogger.com