tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37258556.post1226533442348272368..comments2024-03-28T11:22:57.871-07:00Comments on InScribe Writers Online: Willy and the LookTracy Krausshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05066853243062725525noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37258556.post-20350767103733438212007-12-21T15:18:00.000-07:002007-12-21T15:18:00.000-07:00Good one, LC. Merry Christmas! :)MGood one, LC. Merry Christmas! :)MMarcia Lee Laycockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09109390369843987353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37258556.post-89976797684203690262007-12-18T21:24:00.000-07:002007-12-18T21:24:00.000-07:00Great story, Elsie! I didn't know you were a teena...Great story, Elsie! I didn't know you were a teenage boy in disguise. You captured everything about that boy so well.Violet N.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16586574800230604652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37258556.post-39283467371221523752007-12-18T09:42:00.000-07:002007-12-18T09:42:00.000-07:00This gives me shivers, Elsie. I like how the boy i...This gives me shivers, Elsie. I like how the boy is natural - how he doesn't know what to say and then feels guilty about not visiting Willy. It reads honest. Pamfudge4everhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16295705620837466292noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37258556.post-92082887329845234002007-12-17T15:04:00.000-07:002007-12-17T15:04:00.000-07:00WOW! Love this story. Very powerful. I like the...WOW! Love this story. Very powerful. I like the contrast between the two "looks" and what we want our lives to show on our faces. And you capture the voice of the boy so well! :)Bonnie Way aka the Koala Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11601183003333359031noreply@blogger.com